
The hearth is lying cold, and the thin whistling emanating from the chimney
plays a haunting, mournful tune.
Even the wind wishes for flames in the fireplace
for nature wants always what is natural.
The wood is piled on, the mass keeps rising
and teeters, unbalanced.
The kindle is placed, packed in carefully, stuffed in to fill the gaping holes -
And now, a wavering light is brought to the fuel
Uncertain - does it go here? Where is the place
most sensitive, most ready to catch?
Careful! The bright flame seems so willing to set alight the hands of its wielder
but not the towering column it was meant for
no matter how it is ushered in -
Jabbing, thrusting, urging the flare forward -
What can one do? All is in place, but the wood will not ignite.
What does it take for you, me, our souls, to spark?
What does man do when, try as one might, the multitudes refuse to be set afire
by the wavering light of progress?
Striking, flashing - the idea catches
for a fleeting moment, where things are most perceptive - and a hopeful ember begins to glow
but just as suddenly
all goes up in smoke
all becomes cold and charred
all is back to what it was, before.
Catcher in the Rye: http://ionarts.blogspot.com/2010/01/mon-chevet-catcher-in-rye.html
ReplyDeleteVery haunting, kind of hopeless poem, definitely "ceaselessly musing". I really like the first five lines...as well as the entire poem in general.
i love the metaphor.
ReplyDeletei love the poem.
i love how this was inspired by some of the mundane happenings in your life.
i love your writing.
love love love!
cindy: wow love that blog. arts in dc!! maybe ill follow (like you followed that random guy's blog). really? thanks :) im not sure about the first line...but i like the ending. i think ill edit the first lines.
ReplyDeleteeugenie: i love you :) and its inspired by the NOTHINGS happening in my life.
ahahhaa.
ReplyDeleteall my poems have been inspired by some sort of extreme emotion. lol.
ill need to try writing a poem about some random event in my life one day...